Story Update

Ok so I thought it was time for a update on the progress of my story. I screwed up.

Looking down the road I realized I had left out details, and I screwed up the timeline. So I am going back to fix my mistakes.

Also I have to apologzie. I went back and reread my post on Racial Profiling and I am deeply disappointed in the qaulity of writing and the strength of my argument. I do genuinely believe that racial profiling is at times necissary and not at all racist, and perhaps I will give it another crack some day but in the mean time, sorry.